posted by Lane Savant at 8:52 AM
oh my...nicely done
You are a comet, anapparition sailing throughthe room, navigating thecyber winds like the naturalmariner you are. Yup, Iam still trying to writemy poetic response to theMagpie challenge, and hey,there you are, on her site,and ours, FFTR, Dougieon the spot, Mister Smartie.Congratulations, I say,and more poetry to you.
hmm it leaves me sad.. just a few words but have left impact ..
Growth and humility. Good job indeed!
realities in life stated so eloquently.
Very nice. It's shortness makes an even larger impact.
Strange how that works. Wonderful use of words.
This is really clever! Long may Archimedes smile upon you.
The feedback is magnificent,and I have to face the fact,no not on Facebook, butright here on FFTL, thatA) I put my comment ofcongratulations, and myfuss for my own poem notreceiving such adoration overon the comments for theprevious posting. What thehell is up with that?anyway, bask in the limelightwhile you can, and of courseI am both happy for youand a bit envious, since itwas only days ago that mostof these magpies were commentingover on FFTR.B) It appears that unless youactively click back to each oftheir blogs and leave commentson their poetry, well then thereis a mismatched reciprocation,and they will abandon you indroves.Tonight the film club is screeningFellini's 8 1/2, released in 1963.My first year out of high school.I'm not sure I even knew whoFrederico Fellini was at that point.Probably saw the film years laterwhile at the U of W, after yourreturn from AK and the US Army.
Quirky and marvelous. I had to read this through several times, out loud!
8 1/2 Is my favorite Film of all time.Except for that 20 minute period on Aug 12 back in 1988, and I don't want to talk about that.
we give up much in reaching...though i imagine you still might move it if you try...nice magpie!
I really like this! Thanks.
this was short and cleverhere's my magpie
Now that's what I call FLOW! Your words read like a pencil put to paper - such words are a match made in heaven! Your poem sounds wonderful, great Mag!
a tale in depth, u make me think!
short and thought provoking - right up my alley.
nicely done. the sacrifices we make, but you may still achieve your original goal someday :)
So succinct yet says so much! Nicely put!
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